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「詩」 片隅 Hide
T he Corner Hide
Black lump came flying
Wings spread widely
In the corner of the eye
A desire it is !
Is constructed in a group
A nest is not made.
Deep abyss in a corner
Wed elegant drifts
Fountain of Truth
What also seeing
Look at the desire
Or look at the truth
As a result, do not come out soon
Without desire go away!
Without truth leave away!
Although anyone can say with
Space may be an infinite lust
Re: the corner
By Chelle Webmaster (The PoetsSanctuary) » April 15th, 2013, 11:23 pm
A very metaphorical poem with some eye catching images. Im wondering just what you see in this black figure that seems rather menacing. And then in the other corner there seems to be light and truth instead of the darkness-the age old story.
Re: the corner
By BaywriterElite Member (TPS) » April 15th, 2013, 11:40 pm
Interesting poem. To me, it seemed as if the speaker was putting himself into a corner where he would not be surrounding by temptation and desire. The last two lines of the poem seemed to indicate that when you're in a place of space, surrounded by non-necessities, desire will surely take over. The black figure seemed to represent lust in a negative sense. Even if I'm completely off base here, you got me thinking. Really intriguing work. Thank you for sharing.
By AliMariesDad （TPS） » April 16th, 2013, 9:17 am
This is a great poem, but that last stanza is what makes it powerful! The reader almost gets a sense of 'the middle way' in this - avoid extremes. Very well wri tten .
by hidekazu inoue » April 16th, 2013, 9:52 pm
Hi！chelle, B aywriter, A limaries Dad
In the beginning, it becomes three months I have participated in the TPS
You've given me what splendid really, I say thank you sincerely....
I think that the desire produces the truth, this is leading to the pioneering spirit, and the history was become, but the events in the universe are all unknown to humans.